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All classrooms should have a Honeys and Treasures Group
I believe that we should have Honeys and Treasures once a fortnight and at the end of every term.Honeys and Treasures is when you have a celebration for those people who achieve their goals.
One reason why I think we should have Honeys and Treasures at the end of the term or every second friday is so that our classroom will want to learn more.Everyone will want to be in Honeys and Treasures. They won’t want to be left out of the fun.
Everyone will know their goals because they will be posted on their blog.Added to this they would want to achieve their goals.
The second reason why I think we should have Honeys and Treasures group is because being in that group is awesome.I will feel proud of myself of achieving my goal.There's a lot of junk food,popcorn,lollies,moives,free time and you get treated like an angel.You would be jumping up and down like a rabbit.Come on teachers throw us a honeys and treasure for the good achieving people.
In summary I think our class should have a Honey and Treasures party because people will want to learn and because it is awesome.
Introduction with opinion
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Tino pai Shacay,
ReplyDeleteYou and your group worked well to organise this persuasive argument. You have convinced me that this is a good thing to do. You have not put in a rhetorical question to make a point. Can you put one in and colour code it. Keep up the good mahi. I look forward to reading your independent persuasive work next week.